Talbot Pawn & Loan near closing time on a rainy evening, with an old hunting knife on the worn counter and the security gate still raised.

A One-Act Play

Unredeemed

Some debts don’t show up in the ledger.

Synopsis

Deb Moss has a problem. She pawned her late father-in-law’s hunting knife to cover a family expense, and now she needs to get it back before her husband discovers what she’s done.

She’s three dollars short.

With closing time approaching, Deb calls her old friend Ray Kistler for help. But when she describes the knife, something in Ray changes. He knows it. And when Ray arrives at Talbot Pawn & Loan, the shop’s owner knows him.

What begins as an awkward attempt to undo one small act of dishonesty becomes a reckoning with an old partnership, a long-settled accusation, and the uncomfortable possibility that telling the truth isn’t always the same thing as telling all of it.

About the Play

The numbers can balance and something can still be owed.

Unredeemed is a play about moral accounting: what people owe one another, what can be measured, and what cannot.

Its pressure comes from a small, ordinary transaction. Deb wants to put something back before anyone notices it was gone. Duke believes every account should balance. Ray has spent years becoming very good at answering the questions people actually ask him.

The play lives in the distance between innocence and absolution—between being able to say, truthfully, I didn’t do that, and being able to say there is nothing left to answer for.

From Talbot Pawn & Loan

Three ordinary objects. Three different kinds of debt.

An old Talbot Pawn & Loan ledger open to handwritten transactions, including a funeral expense hidden among routine entries.
01

The Ledger

The answer was always in the books.

A worn Talbot Pawn & Loan ticket for an eighty-dollar loan on a hunting knife.
02

Deb’s Pawn Ticket

Ninety-five owed. Ninety-two in hand. Three dollars opens the door.

An aged full-tang hunting knife with a small antler mark struck twice on the worn grip.
03

The Knife

A family mark struck twice. An object nobody remembers the same way.

In the Room

One set. One clock. One gate.

Closing time is not a metaphor until it is.

The entire play occurs in the public room of Talbot Pawn & Loan. The clock is visible. The manual security gate is visible. Duke closes that gate at exactly five o’clock every day.

At first, those are simply the rules of the shop and practical obstacles in Deb’s effort to get the knife back. As the room changes, the same objects begin to carry different weight.

The production should resist announcing that change. The shop remains a shop. The clock keeps moving. The gate comes down because it is five o’clock.

Production Information & Script

Bring Unredeemed to your audience.

If you’re considering Unredeemed for your production, download a sample here, visit New Play Exchange for the complete script and production information, or request a reading copy directly.

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“What do we owe another person when doing the right thing may cost us something we are terrified to lose?”
BMax